Sunday, October 13, 2019

Concepts to Chapters Part II: Herding Those Characters!

We spoke about a lot of stuff at the last WB.

An interesting day, as everyone at the table had been published (self or through an agency). With that being recognized, our talks turned to current projects and issues of the day. We spoke about cover artists and audio book possibilities. We discussed cover artist and photographer: Disueno Vida Studios (provides discount if you mention Malinda Andrews).

http://www.jamiecatcallan.com/2011/12/gift-of-creativity-writers-toolbox.html

One thing that resonated with me was Malinda Andrews thoughts about fairy tales and the possibility of creating a book. I immediately took a 'back to basics' thought process and looked at how it could apply in the fairy tale world. I started digging around sites and some old notebooks.

Sooooo...


Story Formats

Thirty-six story situations


Followed by...

The meta-plot

The meta-plot begins with the anticipation stage, in which the hero is called to the adventure to come. This is followed by a dream stage, in which the adventure begins, the hero has some success, and has an illusion of invincibility. However, this is then followed by a frustration stage, in which the hero has his first confrontation with the enemy, and the illusion of invincibility is lost. This worsens in the nightmare stage, which is the climax of the plot, where hope is apparently lost. Finally, in the resolution, the hero overcomes his burden against the odds.

The plots

Overcoming the Monster

Definition: The protagonist sets out to defeat an antagonistic force (often evil) which threatens the protagonist and/or protagonist's homeland.

Rags to Riches

Definition: The poor protagonist acquires power, wealth, and/or a mate, loses it all and gains it back, growing as a person as a result.

The Quest

Definition: The protagonist and companions set out to acquire an important object or to get to a location. They face temptations and other obstacles along the way.

Voyage and Return

Definition: The protagonist goes to a strange land and, after overcoming the threats it poses to them, they return with experience.

Comedy

Definition: Light and humorous character with a happy or cheerful ending; a dramatic work in which the central motif is the triumph over adverse circumstance, resulting in a successful or happy conclusion. Booker stresses that comedy is more than humor. It refers to a pattern where the conflict becomes more and more confusing, but is at last made plain in a single clarifying event. The majority of romance films fall into this category.

Tragedy

Definition: The protagonist's character flaw or great mistake which is their undoing. Their unfortunate end evokes pity at their folly and the fall of a fundamentally good character.

Rebirth

Definition: An event forces the main character to change their ways and often become a better person.

The Hero's Journey

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The Heroine's Journey

Victoria Lynn Schmidt wrote two versions of a character's journey: The Feminine and the Masculine Journey. She published her version in 2001 in her book: 45 Master Characters. The most noticeable differences were the circular nature and that the female had to prove herself to herself. Schmidt's version is commonly used in writing as opposed to Murdock's version. Similar to the Hero's Journey, the stages can be interchanged and repeatable.

Illusion of the perfect world

The heroine believes the world she lives in is perfect. She has deluded herself into thinking everything will turn out alright. The heroine may acknowledge that the world isn't ideal, but has some kind of coping mechanism to deal with this fact. These mechanisms may be naivetydenial, or subservience.

Betrayal/disillusionment

A crisis befalls the heroine in which her coping mechanisms fail her and the illusion of the perfect world is shattered. The crisis may be a personal betrayal, realization of the false world view, or her coping mechanisms become unhealthy.

The awakening

At first, the heroine may not want to accept her current state of being, but will decide to do something about her conflict. She will receive discouragement from others, but she know she cannot remain in the illusion. The heroine will be searching for external means of help and guidance. The heroine may often bring tools from the her perfect world to help her along her journey.

The descent: passing through the gates of judgement

The heroine will experience doubt towards her new lifestyle or identity. To move on, she must give up her tools and let go of the doubts holding her back. This stage can be moved around throughout the journey.
"She may be ashamed of  her new identity, guilty about sexual feelings or expression or have fears or shame associated with expressing herself,  honoring intuition, or letting go of relationships that aren’t working for her."

Eye of the storm

Similar to Boon of Success, the heroine triumphs for a short period of time. However, this victory serves as a false calm. This stage can be moved around throughout the journey.
"In the true Heroine’s  Journey,  the heroine may experience momentary but not sustained success because those around her do not want to be a led by a woman/women for long, or the men around her begin to undermine her, or after the crisis passes she is left trying to fill multiple roles that are inconsistent or impossible for a single person to fulfill."

All is lost/death

The heroine realizes that her newly learned skills cannot help her and she cannot fall back on her old ways either. The situation around her gets worse and she has no choice but to accept defeat.

Support

The heroine finds support in a person who will help her out. This person can be anyone ranging from a spirit to a goddess to a friend. The heroine accepts the help of the supporter and comes to understand that "being alone is never enough." This stage can be moved around throughout the journey.

Rebirth/moment of truth

Due to the support she has gotten, the heroine find courage and hope again. She fully understands her place in the world and how she will face her doubts.
"She “awakens” and sees the world and her role in it differently."

Return to a new world

The heroine sees the world as it truly is. She understands herself better and this will change the way she lives her life from then on. This change is more spiritual and internally driven than external.

Some thoughts:
Both Murdock's and Schmidt's book have been criticized in modern-day for its outdated views of feminine values. Murdock's book was published in 1990, so her book contains past views on what a female in society should be. While Schmidt's book was published in 2001, readers also feel that it contains obsolete views on feminine goals. Present-day readers feel that it does not align with modern-day feminism, thus stating that these books are dated.

Hmmmm, wonder if there's an enterprising author out there who could update these concepts for 2020?

According to a 2014 interview between award-winning filmmaker Nicole Franklin and artist and comic book illustrator Alice Meichi Li, a hero's journey is "the journey of someone who has privilege. Regardless if the protagonist is male or female, a heroine does not start out with privilege." Being underprivileged, to Li, means that the heroine may not receive the same level of social support enjoyed by the hero in a traditional mythic cycle, and rather than return from her quest as both hero and mentor the heroine instead returns to a world in which she or he is still part of an oppressed demographic. Li adds, “They’re not really bringing back an elixir. They’re navigating our patriarchal society with unequal pay and inequalities. In the final chapter they may end up on equal footing. But when you have oppressed groups, all you can hope for is to get half as far by working twice as hard.

Frank Herbert said in 1979, "The bottom line of the Dune trilogy is: beware of heroes. Much better [to] rely on your own judgment, and your own mistakes." He wrote in 1985, "Dune was aimed at this whole idea of the infallible leader because my view of history says that mistakes made by a leader (or made in a leader's name) are amplified by the numbers who follow without question."

OK. I'm done for today.

-Dave




Thursday, September 19, 2019

Concepts to Chapters, Part 1: Story Arc Plotting

Writers Block: 
The inability to write (or add to written work). The author is unable to come up with something to say.
NOTE: it is believed that the less interesting the topic, the greater the severity of writers block.

Bah.

First of all, many authors find their topics as the writing process progresses; writing IS a method of discovery after all!

We are the forgers of worlds.
With a series of simple taps, we create new life.
The story inside of you has moved you to write it down.

Use that!

This coming meeting, we are going to talk about the creative process, keeping the writing 'tank filled', and getting the broad strokes of book planning established (methods of plotting).

I'll look at a story's plot arc(s) for the lion's share of the meeting. In this, we will make notes from the idea that
PLOT = ACTION
ACTION DRIVES INTEREST

What I'm bringing to the table is only a smattering of the many and varied methodologies that exist. I'll talk about what works for me. I've got three different things that I've used in writing. I still tap into each of them from time to time.

With that being said, I'm also going to do my best to focus on three general forms of plotting: action, emotional, and historical.

YOU'RE in charge! Feel free to pick and choose what works for you (or bring ideas to share with the class!)

At its simplest, professional writing is (part) habit, passion, study, and planning (yes, I'm looking at you pantsers).

From our last meeting, we broke down some of the habits:

How we write: morning writing, (used to) night writing.
Where we write: Kitchen table, writing space, occasionally the coffee shop.
Motivations: Getting published, using work to find more work, the joy of writing!

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Write on!
-Dave


Sunday, August 18, 2019

KICK OFF!

Welcome to the Writer's Block!

The kick off day is September 9, 2019 from 9 am until noon-ish. I generally take off around 11:30 to grab lunch before heading back to the library for my 'day job'.

As usual, I will bring along tea, hot water, and snacks!

The other day, someone asked me why I titled the laid-back, positive environment of our writer's group "Writer's Block".

The short answer is: I like double meanings.

The long answer is: The word 'block' in the title can equate to a LOT of different meanings! Sometimes, an author may feel as though they need to break through something this is preventing the story from moving forward. Sometimes, solitary scribes secretly seek socially ceremonial situations (an assembly, or Block if you will). Sometimes, an author may feel as though they have found their heads set upon the Block. Or the efforts of said author being auctioned on the block...

I'll stop now.

Another question frequently asked is: "Why did you start the Writer's Block?"

The non-B.S. answer is that I have found in helping other folks succeed in their writing goals, I feels a sense of success and a clearer vision of my goals as an author.

My background as a writer is usually part of the above question as well. I have always written fiction in some form or another all my life. I've got a couple of published works under my belt. I enjoy visiting GenCon's Writers Symposium whenever I am able. When I am not jotting down the seeds of an idea, you might find me hammering away on a keyboard lost in the story du'jour or throwing dice in the midst of a Role Play game. I paint, sketch, and create props. This, coupled with my appreciation of meeting folks and listening to their dreams, nightmares, adventures, and hopes further fuels my love of humanities place in the creative process!

Last, but certainly not least, there's YOUR participation in the W.B.! Below are a few things that we will discuss as openers on our first day.

> Notebooks, Journals, and Recording: Every day, we have an idea or two. Sometimes it might be a way to structure a scene, sometimes it might be a character trait, other times it might be the seed of a new idea. JOT IT DOWN! Take the picture! Dictate it! Sketch the concept. When you bring it into the physical world, it BECOMES REAL.

>Your writing space: Some folks have rooms. Some folks have the dining room table. Are there days / times when you find you are successful? Others have a place in the coffee shop. Sometimes, it is the RITUAL rather than the PLACE. It might be a blending of all these things. This is your INVESTMENT into your craft.

>Your motivations: History? Hope? Escape? Validation? Linguistics? Money? Wisdom? Fame? A little bit of this and that? Appreciate and embrace what motivates you as a Writer. This motivation is your FOUNDATION from which your writing will build upon and grow out of.

>Your PROJECT(s): It might be a seed of an idea, a poem, a historic work of non-fiction, or it might be book 8 in a series of novels. What is it and how are you doing? What can the WB do to help out? We may not have an easy answer on-hand, but we sure will try to find one with you!

So, in closing, here's what to expect on Sept 9th:

>Snacks, coffee and tea
>Resources and communications
>Round-table discussion
>Sign in / contact list
>This year's plan: the 10,000-foot view
>Theme of the day: Intro's and Projects
>Time for public reading / critique
>Discussing the Critique Methodology
>WORDS = SUCCESS (It is time to jump out of the plane)

See you soon!
-Dave

Monday, June 17, 2019

Summer Break!

Hello fellow Writer Blockers;

I'm shooting out this notice to let everyone know that the Writer's Block is going on a Summer break until September. Our Facebook page has details. However, when we return on the second Monday of September, there will be a new structure and workshop-esque environment that I'm trying out!


Hope the Summer months inspire and allow you to PUT THOSE WORDS ON PAPER!


See you soon...



-Dave

Monday, February 11, 2019

Happy New Year

Hello everyone!

It was a crystallizing kind of day at the WB!

Tad let us know about the Gallery 224 poetry readings and workshops going on this year. She also brought in TWO great poems to be critiqued by the group. The critique turned into quiet an inspiring discussion of many topics (location, layout, reflection within the work, weight of concepts and their location in the work, etc.)

Writing bio's came up. We poked the idea with a pointy stick and then let that sleeping dog lay.

Erica is setting the groundwork for the marketing side of things: facebook, blogging, etc. Just click the links to see how she's doing!

Jennifer moved, got employed, created a writing space, and resparked the writing bug!

The idea of creating a 2019 anthology has been officially accepted by the crew. Here's what we're working on so far, as well as a timeline of where we would like to see this go...


Anthology Title Ideas:

The Best Recipies for Snickerdoodles
Cat Sitting and Other Pointless Endeavors
Around the Block
Exit
From the Basement of the Library
The Subterranean Literary Society Presents
Literary Dungeon
How Dogs Think
Footsteps Overhead

Submissions: Poems, Short Stories (3000 - 6000 word count), Essays

Publishers: Kindle Direct, Lulu, Heritage Publishing Co, Foremost Press

November open mic reading: Gallery224, Smith Bros,

Open source photography Unsplash

Facebook page E.collins

*Anyone who stops by the WB can contribute
*Find an editor
*Taking contributions from TODAY until April 8th. (Soft date) May 13 is the Hard Date.

Write on!