Sunday, April 29, 2018

The Not-So-Quiet-Room

Hope everyone had a great WB last week!

Kathy D gave me an update on the going's on:

The Children’s Library is getting new carpet in May, and they’re moving the library into our meeting room. So they’ve asked us to move our meetings into the Quiet Room for May.

Lots of good interaction! 


Jennifer 1 spoke of her religious essays. 
Jennifer 2 brought 7 pages of her Civil War memoir and we critiqued. 
Diane brought in a finished copy of her chapbook along with the trials along the way. 
Kathy brought good cheer and her ever-sharp editorial eye to the table.

Write on everyone! See you on May 14th in the 'Quiet Room'.

-Dave

Thursday, April 5, 2018

Things Done and To-Do

The group covered a TON of items at the last W.B., and I just wanted to both recap and note the plans for the upcoming get-together.

1. Diane is putting together a poetry booklet (good luck on the format issues!)
2. Camp NaNoWriMo is happening this month, I have an account and can see if I can set up a cabin, if anyone is interested.
3. Kathy is sorting out her 500 Word Confusions...
4. Megan has book 3 under construction and has finalized the cover artwork for book 2 of the Bookminder series!
5. I'm playing around with an 8000 word contest for Gen Con's Writer's symposium.
6. Tom (the library director) introduced us to the new Adult Services manager and also informed us that he would like any ideas that we might have for the creation of a 5-minute YouTube vid service that the Niederkorn library is interested in creating.
7. Jen gave us an obituary to read. It kicked off some interesting analysis and response!


One thing that was discussed is the reading / editing / responses to a short story for an upcoming contest. I was under the impression that the due date was April 1, but it turns out it is April 30. Here's the link (if you are interested):
http://www.genconwriters.com/node/193

Looking forward to seeing everyone on April 9th!

-Dave

Monday, February 12, 2018

New Year, Lots of Projects

Greetings to all!

Last W.B. we had Lynn, Megan, Rose, Diane, Kathy, and Dave along with tea, coffee, and banana bread!

Lynn provided a GREAT opening for a sci fi book. Discussion followed. I think it is safe to say that this is one of those story arcs that both engages in a timely manner while also transporting the reader into a neat, cautionary tale.

We talked about Megan's projects. A certain trilogy's final book is coming together even as I type this. Also discussed were the the joys of moving. Boxing things thought lost. Fitting in an established life into the frame of another home (and making it yours). If I wrote in the romance genre, I can see that being the framework of a cool flashback / flash-forward styled book...

Setting up a blog. Go Blogspot! Also, the expectations of writing on a daily / weekly / monthly basis...

Rose talked about holiday letters. This is an interesting time capsule of many nifty nuggets: issues of the day / year, the changes in an author's voice, reflections of the individuals to / from / about...

Another free-form Monday to inspire!

See you on Monday 2/12 for our next installment. I'll bring a goody and more coffee & tea.

Write on.
-Dave



Tuesday, January 9, 2018

Happy New Year Everybody!

Howdy all!

Soooo, I'm looking at the unpublished posts from 2017 and found that I've become a MASTER at writing posts during our Writers Blocks, then saving and never posting them. Still, there are quite a few with some gems jotted down, so if I suddenly seem to have a number of disjointed subjects...

Yesterday, we had our first WB of 2018!

The year is starting off with some new folks as well as the regular lineup. Megan is kicking off a new novel project, Kathy is back from a VERY extended leave and still plugging away at that editors guide. I've come on board with Illusionist Magazine (www.illusioni.st) this week. Yes, the ink is still drying on the contract.

Unfortunately, I was unable to catch up with the whole gang. However, the next WB will include a little free writing practice and I'm planning on discussing plotting for various sized projects.

The next Writer's Block will take place on Monday, Jan 15 at our usual time of 9 am - Noonish.

Write on!
-Dave

Monday, October 30, 2017

Rainy Day (Last Monday)!

It was a little light at the WB today. We hand one author in England, another out sick, some no-shows, and a couple of folks who had to roll in late. I had to leave 90 minutes early, due to a new job kicking off later in the morning, so we jumped right in as folks showed up.

We managed to retrieve a fairly recent copy of a Kathy's The 500 thought to be lost and I managed to do some author blog site reporting.

MK Wiseman made it, head cold and all. She's finishing the edit work for her publisher! WOOT

We talked E E Cummings.

We talked about NaNo plans.

November 14th will be the release of MK Wiseman Bookminder audiobook!

We talked about old projects and possible NaNo goodies attached to the efforts coming up in November.

Kathy D came up with a quad group of time travelers for her NaNo!

All in all it was a pretty good way to kick off the day!

-Dave

Monday, September 25, 2017

Stuff To Do

Greetings!

Today at the Writer's Block, we discussed writing aides, chat groups, and our projects!

We've got the first couple of chapters with more in the works for a mystery from Jen, Rose has her laptop newly updated and is working out some editing details with Kathy, Kathy has hit the letter P in her 500 book, M.K. Wiseman is in heavy editing mode for a couple of stacked projects, and I am prepping my NaNoWriMo effort for November.

There has been talk of an 'Inklings' group branching off from the Writers Block that might take off on the off weeks (on Thursdays, probably around 3 pm-ish) that will move around through the various coffee and spirits shops in Grafton and Cedarburg. More to come as details develop!

Speaking of authors groups, on Wednesday nights, Twitter has a chat #WritersLifeChat at 7:00. Think authors cocktail party with a general theme and then discussions branch off from that.
Go to Tweetchat.com create room, then you enter your hashtag.

Last time, there was a discussion about organizing our work / plots / characters using various techniques. One such technique is the site Obsidian Portal, which may be found at:

www.obsidianportal.com

This is a 'gamers site', meaning that it is designed by (and for) Role Play Gamers who wish to keep information organized and the lines of communications open between players and organizers. It also has everything a developing story needs to keep track of characters, maps, equipment, story arcs, and even fellow beta-readers (through invite-only forums). There are two levels of membership, free (which allows for a couple of 'games' or stories to have their own filing, along with a wiki to use for each); and paid (which unlocks multiple 'games' / stories, along with the full list of applications for each). This is a great option for larger tales, massive character rosters, and series that require a lot of housekeeping and plotting.

Write on!


-Dave

Saturday, August 26, 2017

Contests-palooza

Good day all!

Writer's Block will be at 9 a.m. this coming Monday (8/28) at the W.J. Niederkorn Library. I'm fresh from Gencon and had the good fortune to sit in on a few panels about / for writers.

Also, we have had some great reads at the W.B. meets! If you have anything you are working on or if you want to talk about something that is keeping your keyboard busy, bring it in.

Also, as part of the short story trend that we've been having a lot of success with, I've got the list of contests that we have talked about at the W.B. along with any links that I can find!

Book Bay - A Milwaukee bookstore and a contest

Sixfold - Submit an essay by mid October, judge six writings and then your writings will be judged in turn.
https://www.sixfold.org/

Where Writers Win - You might have to join this site to see what it has to offer, but it's worth a look!
https://writerswin.com/

Glimmer Train - Vermont Journal through Vermont College of Fine Arts MFA division.
http://www.glimmertrain.com/

Hay House - A publishing house.
http://www.hayhouse.com/

That's about it for today. Hope you all have a great weekend and write on!

-Dave

Tuesday, August 8, 2017

More Contests!

Hello everyone!

I found another list of writing contests that we might make the deadline for...

Indiana Review’s Half-K Prize
 offers a first prize of US$1000 and publication. Writers can submit up to three pieces of writing up to 500 words each and there are no genre or form restrictions. Entries open on in July and are expected to close on 15 August.

CLOSED EARLY... It is on this list for a reminder in 2018.

The Sunday Times Short Story Prize
 is the world’s richest short story competition, with the winner receiving £30,000 (approx US$37,500). The 2016 prize was won by Jonathan Tel for his story ‘The Human Phonograph’. Entries for the next prize are expected to open at the end of June and close at the end of September. The six stories shortlisted for the 2016 prize are available here.

WEBSITE: http://shortstoryaward.co.uk/enter

Manchester Fiction Prize
 is a major international literary competition open to anyone aged 16 or over. The winner receives a cash prize of £10,000 (US$15,000). Stories can be up to 2500 words in length. The organisers also offer a Manchester Poetry Prize. Entries will open in February and close in September.

WEBSITE: http://www2.mmu.ac.uk/writingcompetition/fiction-prize/

Zoetrope All-Story’s Annual Fiction Contest
 has the aim of seeking out and encouraging talented writers, with the winning and runners-up’s work being forwarded to leading literary agents. A first prize of US$1000 is also offered. Stories can be up to 5000 words. Entries open on 1 July and are expected to close on 1 October.

WEBSITE: http://www.all-story.com/contests.cgi

Commonwealth Short Story Prize
 aims to bring stories from new and emerging voices, often from countries with little or no publishing infrastructure, to the attention of an international audience. Open to citizens of the 53 Commonwealth countries, the prize covers the five Commonwealth regions: Africa, Asia, Canada and Europe, Caribbean and Pacific. One winner will be selected from each region, with one regional winner to be selected as the overall winner. The overall winner of the Commonwealth Short Story Prize will receive £5000 (US$6250) and the remaining four regional winners receive £2500. Entries for the 2018 Commonwealth Short Story Prize are expected to close on 1 November.
WEBSITE: http://www.commonwealthwriters.org/our-projects/the-short-story/ 


John Steinbeck Short Story Award
 is one of three prizes offered by Reed Magazine. This award is for a work of fiction up to 5000 words. The winner of the John Steinbeck Short Story  Award receives a cash prize of US$1000 and all entries are considered for publication. Entries open on 1 June and close 1 November.

WEBSITE: https://www.reedmag.org/

Boulevard’s Short Fiction Contest for Emerging Writers
 is open writers who have not yet published a book of fiction, poetry or creative non-fiction with a nationally distributed press. Stories may be up to 8000 words and must be previously unpublished. The winner will receive US$1500 and have his or her story published in the magazine. Entries close 31 December.

WEBSITE: http://www.boulevardmagazine.org/short-fiction-contest

-Dave

Monday, July 10, 2017

Music & Contests

Good day all!

We had a couple of things go on with today's W.B.

First off, we discussed Book Track (website / soundtrack for online books). MK Wiseman uses that one to add a little sonic flavor to her books Millicent and Rue and Hack give 'me a look and see what I mean!

Next, we talked about contests. Below are three contests that have early submission dates in October:


  • Genre short stories writersdigest.com/writers-digest-competitions/popular-fiction-award
  • FanStory.com (writing contests with cash prizes)
  • Short short (1500 words or less) bit.lymshort-short


Also, we read some stuff! Diane gave us a sample of her poetic efforts much to the appreciation of all. Megan gave us a read from her online Millicent and Rue book (note that the link may be found at the MK Wiseman site). Kathy linked us up to her 500 Word Confusions. I handed out some reading homework to a couple of our authors (more on that one later...)

For next W.B., we are going to try something a little different. Diane and I are bringing in some 'fun and games' writing & poetry primers designed to inspire and prompt discussion. Come on down and give it a try!

See everyone July 24th!

-Dave

Monday, June 5, 2017

Whoop whoop whoop (flashing red lights, much scrambling...)

Good day to all!

We have an issue that has popped up for the W.B.

Apparently, there has been a cross-scheduling snafu between our Monday meets and the library's summer reading / Lego project programming.

Long story short, we have to find a new place to hang out OR shut down the W.B. for the next couple of months.

I would much rather keep the W.B. going.

Here are the options that I've come up with so far:

1. Go to the public area of the Niederkorn. Up on the second floor, there is an area next to the quiet room where there are public PC's, study cubicles, and couches. Anne let me know that we could take over the spot up there.

2. Find a coffee shop. It should be someplace that has the space to hold 6+ of us AND be accessible to folks with limited mobility. Smith Bro's coffee might work, if I get in there early and block off a spot by the window. Collectivo or Starbucks might work, but that's in Grafton.

3. I can check out the Saukville library for a public meeting space, but I don't recall seeing one the last time I was in there.

4. Any other suggestions?

-Dave

Friday, March 24, 2017

Dusting off the Block

Soooooo...

I've been absent as of late. Between doctor appointments and insane snowstorms, I have not been able to give the Block it's due!

However; Writer's Block is still up and running.

We have our next meet at the Niederkorn at 9 a.m. until noon-ish on Monday, March 27th.

There will be tea and snacks.

I'll drag along a copy of Greenshore: The Hollow.

We'll talk about editing, continuity, book goals, and might even do some live reading! I look forward to catching up with everyone.

-Dave

Sunday, January 29, 2017

Let the writing begin!

Greetings to all!

We were once again treated to a full table, including the author of the Bookminder series Megan Wiseman! I'm trying out some new stuff this year, starting off with a focus on "Looking at what makes a published book work". With that being said, today's book was Finding Audrey by Sophie Kinsella.

Next W.B., we will talk about Holes by Sachar. In this book, look for character development! We will discuss how characters are introduced, what changes they undertake, and how this relates to the plot. If there is time, we will also discuss certain character's try/fail cycles and what came out of these story events.

Write on, everyone!
-Dave

P.S. I've put a link to Megan's website up at the right side of this page.

Monday, January 9, 2017

2017 and the Writer's Block Returns!

Happy New Year everyone!

We had a relaxing start to the W.B. this year, did a little catching up and some recap of December's W.B.
Then we got down to business!
I.   BREAKING DOWN A BOOK: Storm Warning (The Dresden Files) by Jim Butcher.
     1. The 'prep work': Look at the chapter-by-chapter structure (location / characters / events).
     2. Discuss how the story arc is portrayed and structured.
     3. Redeeming qualities verses issues of the story.
II.  We talked about Enneagram of Personality and the 9 personality 'archtypes' along with how they interact on the enneagram chart.
III.    Our book that we will break down for the 1/23 W.B.: Finding Audrey by Sophie Kinsella
         We will start with chapter 1 (setting, characters, events) and move on through to the end of the book. Ask yourself "What resonated?" Note the important, emotional elements. Try to find story arc links and what is skipped over. I'll try to get the chapter breakdown put together electronically and posted out here before the next meeting.
    If the magic is REALLY working in my favor I'll try to get the Storm Warning break down up on the blog as well!
-Dave

Sunday, November 13, 2016

Hitting the NaNo Mid-Point

Greetings Authors!

Our half-way point for NaNoWriMo approaches as does our first Writer's Block of this month. I've been busy hammering away at my book, as I'm sure all of you are!
Sadly, I'm also behind on my word count. I should be hitting the 21,000 mark today, but have just past the 13,000 mark. The optimist in me is whispering:

Just find a quiet place to drink coffee and hammer on the keyboard for 4 or 5 hours and you'll be OK...

The realist in me is stating:

Hey, you're typing every day. Be glad for it.

Glad I am. That's what it is all about folks! Find time, even if it isn't enough time; to WRITE. You can do it. That story is in you.

See everyone on Monday. I'll have tea and chocolate chip cookies!

-Dave

Monday, October 31, 2016

Pre Launch NaNoWriMo 2016

Good day all!

I hope you have your trick-or-treat buckets all filled and ready to go! At midnight tonight, Halloween ends and NaNoWriMo begins. That's 1,667 words a day, or a goal of 2,000 words if you want to play it safe.

If you still have to sign up, its FREE! Just follow the link up on the right of this page and fill out the information. It's pretty quick and easy to do. My handle is the "Black n Blue Knight" and my region is USA :: Wisconsin :: Elsewhere. Do a friend request and we can partner up in NaNo land!

You can do it. It's already in your mind, all you have to do is record it on your screen or sheet.

-Dave

Tuesday, October 18, 2016

Restructuring the Block?

Hello all!

It's been a hectic couple of weeks at my end. Sorry for the lack of blogging. HOWEVER, I have put a few things together for the next Writers Block! Below is a rough plan of how I'm going to run the Oct 24th Block:

OPENING: First-come-first-up order for discussions.
9-9:30 Discussions of current readings, writing questions, concerns, and future topics.
9:30 - 10 Divide the 30 minutes into blocks to discuss writing that has been submitted by the group members - OR - continue the 'Discussions' segment for late comers.
10-10:30 Divide the 30 minutes into blocks for turn-by-turn issues of the day for the group to work out.
10:30-11 This week's workshop project: For Oct 24th, we'll talk about focus on marketing tricks that actually might help out in focusing on the book!

11:00-?? Final thoughts, goal setting, and discussions
  • Discuss other writing groups: DeKalb Area Creative Writers, Sheboygan County Writers Club, Cedarburg Public Library
  • HOW TO: Log onto National Novel Writing Month and Writers Block at Niederkorn!
The final thing I have to add to today's post is a personal goal of my own: I'm going to begin writing out the NaNo book on a day to day basis, with an added wrinkle of challenge; each day will end with that part of the work getting processed through my editing program. My goal in this is to eliminate my need to have the editing program by finding my (worse) writing flaws and fixing those first.

Tuesday, September 13, 2016

Yesterday's W.B...

Great meet up!

This one is going to be short and sweet.

Yesterdays consensus was:

EVERY DAY we are to sit down and write something.

That is all. See you in two weeks!

-Dave

Friday, September 9, 2016

Relationships versus the Ensemble in stories

Relationship stories...
...are set in prime motivation stories where the page turners are between two or three beings (buddy cops, romance, kid/horse/parent, forced road trip 'pals', three rebels fighting the Empire, etc.)

PRIMARY MOTIVE: to observe how the relationship develops.
Theme: how why two/three beings fit together:

The formula / pattern:
  • Denial in the potential of a relationship.
  • Show how the thorns poke each other (dislikes)
  • Reluctance to build a connection, but they have to!
  • Begin the 'weave' or 'braid the roses' as the pair / trio are forced to work together.
  • Exploration of the relationship.
  • The (end of) Act II disaster: where things break apart (reader will say "Oh NO!"
  • Acceptance of the relationship (The End).
        WARNING: Watch out for the 'Idiot Plot' (common to RomComs) where all the problems would be solved is the two main characters would simply talk to each other. This kind of issue to incredibly cliché and considered a non-issue by many readers. EARN the bumpiness. Have the ENTIRE book build to the disaster (such as the film While You Were Sleeping). Create 'of course they will do this' (such as Han Solo leaving the rebels at the end of Star Wars); Lea is devastated as she realizes the 'friendship' was only business; THEN embrace the 'whoo hoo!' moment is when Han has a change of heart and comes blazing back.

Page turners are built around the crisis moments that occur during the relationships. Fulfilling on the promises require tone, progress, and creating the RIGHT crisis for the moments of the relationships. Do the crisis's reinforce the story? Does support between the characters exist? How did the writer indicate that two characters belong together?
1. Do the characters complete each other?
2. Have gaps / holes been defined for the relationships to fill?
3. Love stories make the reader fall in love, friendship stories make the reader part of the buddy group (such as the first Lethal Weapon, ).
4. The reader wants the main characters to MAKE A BETTER CHOICE even though the character is going to make a less than perfect decision during a crisis moment.

Ensemble stories...
...are the group of folks working in the same direction on a problem.

PRIMARY MOTIVE: Get the 'band' together to stop the problem!

Even though it is a group, there is still a primary arc of one or two characters combating the heart of the problem. This will bookend the beginning / end of the story to give a sense of completion. Examples from film:
  • 2 sisters torn from each other reunite in the end (Frozen)
  • Tony Stark verses his narcissistic ethics of 'stepping on the wire' (Avengers)
  • 2 brothers save the orphanage (Blues Brothers)
  • A baker's life implodes and leaves her with nothing; she finds the strength though her friends to move ahead in life (Bridesmaids)
The ensemble is handled through dialogue. NO WORDS ARE WASTED.
A preface may be needed to set up the 'big bad' of the story, then Chapter 1 should focus on the main character at the heart of the problem (even if the main character does not realize it yet). Film example: Trinity verses the Agents (preface), Next scene: Neo waking up (Chapter 1). (The Matrix)
Bring each member in while defining who / what they are through individual scenes with the main character core of the 'gang'.
Have background dialogue bring feeling in for other main characters and seed feelings / reactions.
Character voices are important and each should be unique!
Don't marginalize characters; have each bring SOMETHING more than a 'one note'; keep everyone respectable! Have each character in the group be there for 'something'. Have secondary characters be 'fans' of specific main characters / ideals.

Multiply each scene's / prop's use throughout the group. In other words, each scene should link in multiple ways to 2+ scenes coming up (whenever possible).
Characters will engage on two levels: professional and personal.

Dialogue might be a caricature of REAL dialogue (the Avengers Movie, Oscar Wilde books, etc).

Characterization of an ensemble cast:
  • Large cast, but each with a little time 'up front'.
  • Every scene must serve multiple 'shows of character': The mindset, skill(s), and attachment to the problem.
  • Each character must have an arc to promote GROWTH or CHANGE. Create momentum for each character.
  • Who is the primary Protagonist in the group? What / who is the Antagonist against the group (either from the outside or from within)? Now show us why as the story progresses.
  • Think about the group tying up the Act III catharsis. How does each character arc lead to the group tie up during the catharsis? Let everyone turn to their specific strengths and support each other to do this in Act III.
  • Give the characters a sense of liberation from whatever was repressing them.
  • Give action moments of WHOAH! to break the fatigue to the non-stop action of the Act III catharsis point.
  • Pacing is important: Once you set the pace within your first couple of chapters, you must remain true to that pace though the book (or steadily / gently quicken it as the chapters progress).

Friday, September 2, 2016

Two Common "Planner Paths"

Good day all!

Today I'm going to talk about two common ways that writers who are 'planners' set up the overall structure of their stories. Hope it helps!

Disclaimer: Yep, there are other ways to structure your story, but these two seem to be the ones most talked about in the circles where I surf. Both also follow the assumed rising-action (stakes)-until-catharsis-then-ending method as well.

#1: The Three Act Play: This is the most common 'old fashioned' form of structure. It is SO familiar and ingrained into most readers minds that it provides a 'safe' and 'comfortable' read when done correctly and a sensation of 'messiness' when done incorrectly. When you are planning this kind of structure, the Heart of your story arc is in Act II. Your character introductions, themes, and setting are set up in Act I. Catharsis is hit at the beginning of Act III, then you tie it up and write The End.
   Due to our cross-media culture and concepts of 'properties' / 'franchises', most of today's three-act stories are beginning to blend into script writing rules (allowing for easier book-to-movie deals). With that in mind, the three-act structure will (more or less) come together as follows:
ACT I
     1. The first sentence that opens the tale.
     2. Introduce the Protagonist, hint at the Problem, tease the elements of the Setting / Major Themes
ACT II
     1. The Protagonist is launched into the Heart of the Problem (some kind of disaster strikes)
     2. Pinch #1: Remind the reader of the Problem, show the Protagonist failing / messing up when the Problem re-appears.
     3. Midpoint: The story flip-flops or changes in some way, with the Protagonist thinking they solved the Problem, but has only made things WORSE.
     4. Pinch #2: Deal with minor plot points, start hinting around at how to bring things together, even if the Protagonist cannot see them yet.
     5. Dark Night Of The Soul: All seems to be lost for the Protagonist until,,,
ACT III
     1. The Protagonist deals with the Problem when everything comes together!
     2. The final battle / Catharsis
     3. Tying up the minor points (watch out for info dumps!)
     4. The final sentence that closes the tale.

That's about it for this type of planning! Try to keep the lions share of the story in Act II (keep it around 2/3rd to 3/4 of the total pages).

#2: 32 Scenes: This is a less-structured way of planning, allowing for more twists and turns and keeping the reader in a state of suspense and tension. Take care not to lose minor plot arcs and also try to keep from traveling too far off the plot (this will create distrust for the reader).
   Here's how it works: For dramas and biographies, plan on creating 30-32 scenes (or chapters). For action / thrillers, bump the number of scenes / chapters to 38-40; this keeps the scenes shorter and gives the books a faster pacing.
   Your first scene or Preface should introduce the Problem and/or the Protagonist. However that scene plays out will set the TONE for the ENTIRE BOOK. This creates trust between the story and the reader (be careful how you manipulate it). Early scenes should have a lot of unanswered questions and teasing of things to come.
   By the 4-6th scene, you should fall into a kind of "Because of X, then Y happens..." This rhythm should end each scene with a question / problem that is dealt with in the next 1-3 scenes.
   Catharsis should happen around 4-6 scenes from the end.
   The last scene should tie up everything and reflect the issue presented in the first scene, to give the reader a sense of completion.
    I tend to write the 32 Scenes down on a sheet of lined paper, with each line being the scene descriptor. When I am doing the novel-in-a-month thing, I try to work on expanding each (single) scene / line into 1700 -  2000 words. At the end of of the month, I've got my novel 'done'.

Have fun and write on!
-Dave

Sunday, August 28, 2016

Satisfaction

Plotting a stories ending is the light at the end of the tunnel. Writing the story to the point of reaching this 'light' may involve a number of twists and turns, but knowing where you are going as a writer generally allows a return to the plot arc if you find yourself lost. With that in mind, ask yourself this question:

How is the story I'm working on going to end for my protagonist?

I did a little digging and found some gems:

The knee-jerk answer is generally something like this: "For any story to have a satisfying ending, the protagonist of the story must end up in a better, happier state than he or she began the story in."

That's all well and good; it gives the reader a sweet sense of satisfaction after the trials and tribulations found on the road of the stories main arc.

However...

Characters May Affect Change: Your character may change his situation, his environment, and thus put an end to the conflict.  This is the classic tale of the hero overcoming cancer, the hero putting down a mutiny, the cop catching the bad guy, the farm girl marrying the handsome landowner, and so on.

Character May Change as a Result of Conflict.  In this ending, our protagonist is permitted to lose, so long as he or she grows from it.  So the kid dies from cancer, but learns to grow and accept death in the process.  Or your hero walks the plank, loses his ship, but is better prepared for the signs next time a mutiny is about to break out.   In these cases, the growth of the character becomes more important than winning.  Even though the battle is lost, something is salvaged from the incident. The protagonist learns how to live.

Your Audience Can Be Changed by the Story. Perhaps each of you can dig back into your own lives and find events, books or movies that have dramatically affected you.

  • Why do more short stories than novels end on tragic notes?
  • Lazy writers not working on going for the 'fix'. True tragedy requires finesse and irony in a cautionary tale resolution (these are the 'sucker punch' stories).

  • How do you keep an ending from being predictable or boring?
  • Surprise is not always about what happens, but it can be as an unpredictable (but logical) emotion or an emotion far more powerful than expected.

  • How do you write a stand-alone ending with sequel potential?
  • Don't kill everybody.
    The world should be larger than the story.
    The villain's world is well populated.
    What type of series is this? Will each book have an immediate follow-up or will one or more generation have passed? Will each book have unique protagonists?

  • What are the best ways to avoid info dump endings? (the original Psycho's last 5 minutes)
  • As a writer, stay interested.
    Info dump becomes an appendix.
    Go back and resolve the info dump 'chunks' in earlier periods of the story.

  • Are there differences between writing endings for the first novel in a series and other novels in the series?
  • You've got more endings as you end more books in the series, so you've practiced and have become better at it. Keep an eye on the Mega-plot that covers the entire series. Wrap up everything from the beginning of the book, but not the 'question' set at the beginning of the first book (save that to end the final book).

  • How do you know which questions to leave unanswered?
  • Don't let the first book be boring. You can tie things up in a nice (broken) bow, but the bow will have to be untied and fixed in later books. Don't hold too much back for the sequels. The first book should answer questions DEEPLY, but then long-range issues become forefront.

  • What sort of attention do you give to your last lines?
  • How can you make sure the ending is working. Leave the reader with an image / phrase that ties up the plot / theme. Connect the two most important characters. Look back on the emotional resonations / beats and echo the pattern in the end. Humans love echoes (it makes us feel smart). Go back and create an opening sentence that reflects the closing sentence. The first line is part of the sales pitch to the reader to read the book... the last line should tell the reader 'thank you for reading'. Encapsulate the irony.

    Hope this helps!
    -Dave